Tuesday, December 13, 2011

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TURTLE LEGEND IN SABAH

Many, many years ago, there lived an old woman. This woman was well-liked in her village. She was very beautiful when she was young and had married a stranger from another village. She had a son. His name was Ondu.
            When
Ondu was five years old, his father died. While he was walking in the forest a huge tree fell on him. This made Ondu’s mother very sad. She had to work and support her son. She did work for the others and she also sewed clothes. In this way she brought up her son who became a young and handsome man.
            The woman worked very hard. At last, she became old and ill. However her son was of no use. He never did any work. Every day he would go down the river. There he would disturb
the girls who were washing clothes and bathing. He would waste his time with boys who did nothing useful. The mother often advised him but he never listened. She would even ask the chief to talk to the boy. However, all their efforts failed
            One day Ondu was walking in the jungle. He saw a young girl picking fruit from a tree. He stopped and talked to her. 
 Ondu: “I’ve never seen you before. Are you new to the village?”  He asked. 

The girl: “Yes, I am new to the village. My parents and I just moved to the village yesterday. We are staying opposite the chief’s house,” replied the girl.
Narrator: Then she walked away. Ondu liked the girl very much. He went to the jungle and met her there often. As time passed he fell in love with that girl and wanted to marry her. One day, an old friend met Ondu’s mother. She asked him how her son was. 
 The old lady: “Where is your son? I am sure he must be a brave young man by now. Life should be much easier now than he has grown up.”

 Ondu Mother: “No,” the lady said sadly. “He has grown up, but he is more a burden than anything else. He refuses to do any work. He wastes his time with his friends,” she added.
Narrator: The friend was surprise to hear this. She was saddened too. The friend then said,
The old lady: Let me try and talk to him. Perhaps he will listen to me.”
Narrator: She said this and left.  When the friend saw the boy, she told him about his mother’s worries. The boy did not seem to listen. The friend went to the mother and suggested that should get married.
The old lady: “I know a lot of young man who wasted their time doing nothing. After marriage, they became responsible.”
           
That night the mother asked Ondu
Ondu Mother:, “Son, I’ve something important to talk to you. Please come here. If you like any girl in the village please let me know. I’ll get you married to her.”
           
Ondu: “I have met the girl in our village. She stays opposite the chief’s house. I want to marry this girl.” 
           
Narrator: The mother was surprised to hear this. The next day, the mother went to see the girl’s family. The family liked Ondu very much and agreed to the marriage. A few weeks later, the wedding was held. All the people in the village celebrated the wedding. Ondu’s wife came to live with his mother. She never did any work in the house. All the work had to be done by Ondu’s mother. Ondu never took pity on his mother. He never told his wife to help his mother.
A few months later, the woman’s friend came again. She asked about Ondu. Ondu’s mother complained about him and his wife. Ondu’s wife became very angry. When the friend left the house, Ondu’s wife scolded her mother-in-law. 
          
Ondu’s wife:   “I never knew you hated me so much. Why do you complain about me to your friends?”
Narrator: said the daughter-in-law.  When Ondu returned home that evening, his wife complained. 
           
Ondu’s wife: “Your mother hates me very much. I heard her complaining about you and me to her friends. I will not stay in this house anymore. It is like hell to me.”
Narrator: The old woman tried to calm down the daughter-in-law but she would not listen. Ondu’s wife asked Ondu to build a new house where they could stay on their own.The next day, Ondu took a few of his friends and built a new house. His mother begged him not to go but he would not listen. Instead, he pushed her aside. The old woman fell down and injured herself. There were some thorny leaves lying on the floor. She had brought them to make medicine. The young girl also pushed the old woman. The mother fell on the thorny leaves and was blinded. She could not see anymore and cried for help. Ondu and his wife left for their home.The old woman wept. She realized that she was old, sickly and blind. She thought of who would help her or give her food. She just wept and wept. The daughter-in-law told the village people that her mother-in-law was cruel. She said that her mother-in-law would often beat her. The villagers believed this story. 
            The old woman stayed all by herself. She did not eat or drink. She did not move from her place at all. At last, she decided that she would beg her son to return. She thought she would jump into deep river if her son did not return to her. 
            Slowly, she came out of the house. She tried to find the way to her son’s house. She asked the people but no one would help her. The villagers believed the young girl’s story. They were angry with the old woman. Slowly, she came near to the river. She could hear the sound of running water. She sat down by the river. 
          
 Ondu’s mother:  “What a cruel world this is. When I was young and beautiful, young men could come around me. Now that I am old and helpless, no one wants to help me.” She looked very sad. 

  Narrator:    As she was weeping, a big turtle came out of the river. It saw the woman sitting there alone. 

 Turtle:“You are blind and you are sitting near a river. It is too dangerous,”           
Ondu’s mother: “I want to kill myself by jumping into the river,” My son has left me. My daughter-in-law says bad things about me to all the village people. They believe her. Everyone is against me. Why should I live?”
 
 Turtle: “Do you think that killing yourself will solve the problem? Will your son and daughter-in-law change if you kill yourself? No, you must prove yourself. Come, I’ll take you to the chief. We will explain all to him. He will tell you what to do,”
The chief called for all the people to assemble. The people gathered noisily. The chief asked them to be quiet. When they were quiet, the chief asked the turtle to speak. 
           
 The turtle said, “All of you have made a mistake. You have not believes this old lady’s story. Instead, you have believed the daughter-in-law’s false story. Ask her for forgiveness. Otherwise, a bad curse will fall on this village.” 

Narrator:  The people were frightened. They realized their fault. They asked the old lady for forgiveness. They also scolded the son and daughter-in-law for treating the old lady badly. Ondu and his wife promised to look after the old lady. 
            The old lady was very happy. She went to the turtle and said
Ondu’s mother:  “You have saved my life and given me happiness. How can I thank you?”

  The turtle replied, “For what I have done, I ask you one favor. Please tell all the human beings that they should not eat the meat of the turtles.”

            The old lady went up to the chief and made this request. The chief agreed and ordered everyone to leave the turtle in peace. 
            To this day, many people in Sabah do not eat turtle meat

Monday, December 12, 2011

"PARAGRAPH"

Topic
Smoking Cigarettes.
Topic sentences
Smoking cigarettes can be an expensive habit.
Supporting details
Cigarettes cost about $2.50.
The average smoker smokes two packs a day.
The annual expense for this smoker is $1,825.00
The smoker must also pay for extra cleaning of carpeting, furniture, and clothes.
Conclusion
On the whole, it is difficult to estimate the cost of this additional expense, one can see that this hidden expense does contribute to making smoking an expensive habit.
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Paragraph :
          Smoking cigarettes can be an expensive habit. Considering that the average price per pack of cigarettes is about $2.20, people who smoke two packs of cigarettes a day spend $$5.00 per day on their habit. At the end of one year, these smokers have spent at least $1,825.00.  But the price of cigarettes is not the only expense cigarette smokers incur.Since cigarette smoke has an offensive odor that permeates clothing, stuffed furniture, and carpeting, smokers often find that these items must be cleaned more frequently than those of nonsmokers. On the whole, it is difficult to estimate the cost of this additional expense, one can see that this hidden expense does contribute to making smoking an expensive habit.





Topic
Smoking Cigarettes.
Topic
Television effects on children.
Topic sentences
Watching  television programs could influence to our mind especially on children.
Supporting details
Health issue and repeated.
Children become rude, irresponsible, and act.
Made children passive and unresponsive to their surroundings.
Bombarded with sexual messages and images in all media hence.
Conclusion
In conclusion, parents should monitor and limit the amount of time their kids spending on watching television.

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Paragraph :
     Watching  television programs could influence to our mind especially on children.TV programs have become a public health issue and repeated exposure to violent programs will result in aggressive behavior in children. After watching violent TV programs, children become rude, irresponsible, and act impulsively.  In research, it is stated that the more children watch violence on TV, the more fearful and distrustful they become. Futhermore, excessive exposure to television made children passive and unresponsive to their surroundings. Kids today are bombarded with sexual messages and images in all media hence, parents are often concerned about whether these messages are healthy. As well as encouraging a sedentary lifestyle, television can also contribute to childhood obesity by aggressively marketing junk food to young audiences. In conclusion, parents should monitor and limit the amount of time their kids spending on watching television.


Monday, December 5, 2011

"UNFORGETABLE CHILDHOOD MEMORY"

      All people in this world have had their childhood before becoming adults. Childhood are memories that cannot be forgetten by any person whether it sweet or sad memories. All people will be past through, because of past experiences we will be more mature. The school is the most beautiful moments for children and save a lot of memories. We are fortunate if we have or can learn at school, because not all children in this world get the opportunity learn at school. My first school is Pre-school Agama Islam Kuala Papar which is I was 6 years old. After a year, I entered into primary school at SK Kuala Papar starting from standard one till standard five.Then I moved into SK Pekan Kinarut Papar at the age 12 years old, because of family problems.
     Unforgettable childhood memory was during my primary schools at SK Kuala, Papar. It happens when I was 8 years old and in Standard Two. I have three friend who close to me and I know them since standard one. Me and my friends have habit which is we like to hide other student belongings such as books, pencil’s bag, and other. Then we will put these items in the other student bag and some students will already know who the person doing it.                                                                                  Sometimes our actions cause the girl students to cry because of lost their goods.
      One day, a girl student also daughter to one of our school teachers, complained to her father that she lost her purse. During that time, I don’t know what happened. After the break, I went to class and see our Class Teacher was inside. All of student was asked to stand and the teacher asked if anyone of us found the purse. Everybody was quiet and did not know. Because no one admits, the teacher makes a check to each student. When it turns for my bag to be checked, I did not feel scared because I don’t know about the purse.
     Suddenly, I was very surprised when the teacher found the purse in my bag and the girl student admits that belongs to her.  I was lucky during that time when my friends claimed that three of them who found the purse in the store after all student change clothes and go out for recess. They conspired to hide the purse in my bag to charge me that i’m taking the purse, without them realize that taking other people purse or wallet is a serious matter.
  


 We were brought to Standard Three class to receive our punishment because at that time our class teacher teaching the Standard Three students. I should not be guilty in this matter, but because of other student complained that we often hide their goods, I also had to take the rap. We stood in front of the class while the teacher get angry and say out loudly our offense in front of the Standard Three students and spank two times for each of us. At that time, I just know and feel the meaning of “shame”. I was looking to the floor during the punishment until it finish.
     I think this is a good lesson for me and my friends not to do things like that again. But, in fact we are still doing the same thing but just not involving valuable goods. My friends really like to see people angry, especially the girl students and I just support them from behind.